Developmental editing is a detailed review of your manuscript’s structure and storytelling, looking at how well the key elements work together to support the book as a whole.

It focuses on the bigger picture of the story – including structure, pacing, character development, and narrative flow – and identifies areas where the manuscript may be unclear, uneven, or not yet fully effective.

I provide clear, structured feedback on what’s working, what needs attention, and what could be strengthened to improve the overall shape and impact. This includes both written feedback and inline comments where helpful.

The aim is to give you a clear understanding of your manuscript as a whole, so you can revise with direction and purpose rather than uncertainty.

Developmental editing is typically most useful after a full draft has been completed and you’re ready to refine the story at a structural level.

WHAT YOU GET
▪️A detailed editorial report covering structure, pacing, character arcs, theme, voice, worldbuilding, and whether
the ending lands as intended, all with clear insight, constructive suggestions, and supportive feedback
throughout.
▪️Suggested alternatives for wording and improvements at paragraph level to help enhance flow, clarity, and emotional impact.
▪️Comments addressing big-picture issues like plot, pacing, clarity, and storytelling, with specific areas highlighted for further attention.
▪️Clear next steps to guide your revisions, giving you practical options while keeping you fully in control of the final version.

TURNAROUND
4 - 8 weeks, depending on word count. This will be confirmed with you before booking.

PRICING
Up to 30,000 words - £700
30,001 - 60,000 - £800
60,001 - 90,000 - £900
Over 90,000: +£15 per additional 1k

If you’d like to discuss your manuscript and whether this stage is right for you, you’re welcome to get in touch.