A detailed review of your submission materials to help you present your work clearly and professionally to agents or publishers.

I look at your query letter, synopsis, and first three chapters, focusing on how well they work together – the strength of the hook, clarity of the pitch, pacing, and how effectively the opening pages pull a reader in.

You’ll receive clear, practical feedback on what’s working, what may be weakening your pitch, and where adjustments could strengthen your chances of standing out.

If more than three chapters need reviewing for submission, get in touch, and we can arrange a bespoke quote.

WHAT YOU GET
Query Letter Review
▪️In-line comments on clarity, tone, and structure.
▪️Feedback on how well it represents your story and hooks a literary agent.
▪️Suggestions for improving impact and readability.

Synopsis review
▪️In-line comments on clarity, structure, pacing, and tone.
▪️Suggestions to improve flow and ensure all key story points are included.
▪️Guidance on tightening and strengthening impact.
▪️An overall summary highlighting strengths and areas for improvement.

First Three Chapters Review
▪️In-line edits and notes on opening hook, character introductions, and dialogue.
▪️Feedback on pacing and whether the story starts in the strongest place.
▪️Notes on clarity, exposition, and any issues such as info-dumping or uneven flow.
▪️Comments on how effectively the opening engages the reader.

Overall Summary
▪️A concise overview of what is working well across your submission package.
▪️Key areas to strengthen before sending to agents.

TURNAROUND
2 weeks.

PRICING
£180

Ready to get your submission package agent-ready? Let’s take a look.